Analysis of a student's blog

For my analysis of a student's blog, I will be analysing Daniel Bower's blog, who is the same candidate who's thriller opening 'Young Killer' I analysed earlier in my blog. Like his thriller opening, Dan's blog is not how I would like my blog to look in the end since it is full of spelling mistakes and the presentation very plain and it is clear that no effort has been made to rectify any of his mistakes.

The candidate has made no changes to the overall colour scheme apart from making the titles in his blog purple which I feel isn't a very good use of colour since the brightness of the font is fairly disorientating and distracting to the reader. He has created labels for the blog which makes it easy to navigate around the blog which is a good addition. I am going to use labels in my own blog so that viewers can navigate around my blog with ease, I am going to refrain from using any bright colours because I feel that the bright colours make the post difficult to read.

The size of font varies throughout the blog which in some cases has made it difficult to read due to the small size of the font. I will make sure that in my blog the font is always at a suitable size for someone to be able to read it easily. 

The candidate hasn't used any variety throughout his presentation which has made it look fairly bland, he could have used different methods of presenting things such as using a prezi presentation or uploading videos of himself speaking. I will make sure that I incorporate some variety in my blog so that it is more appealing to the viewers and because the presentation can count towards extra marks.